Table of Contents
Preface v
Introduction vi
Suggestions for the Instructor viii
Suggestions for teaching Chapter 1 viii
Suggestions for teaching Chapter 2-the patterns viii
Suggestions for the Student xii
How to get the most from this book xii
Marginalia: to encourage deliberate craftsmanship xiii
A paragraph analyzing a simile in poetry xv
A paragraph defining a term xvi
1 The Sentence 1
What exactly is a sentence? 1
Some helpful references 5
2 The Twenty Patterns 6
Now let's make sentences grow … 6
Compound constructions 6
Pattern 1 Compound sentence with semicolon and no conjunction 7
Pattern 1a Compound sentence with conjunctive adverb (connector) 10
Pattern 1b Compound sentence with coordinating conjunction (also connector) 12
Pattern 1c Compound sentence with two or more semicolons 14
Pattern 2 Compound sentence with elliptical construction 15
Pattern 3 Compound sentence with explanatory statement 18
Sentences with series 21
Pattern 4 A series without a conjunction 22
Pattern 4a A series with a variation 26
Pattern 5 A series of balanced pairs 30
Pattern 6 An introductory series of appositives 33
Pattern 7 An internal series of appositives or modifiers 37
Pattern 7a A variation: a single appositive or a pair 40
Pattern 8 Dependent clauses in a pair or in a series 43
Repetitions 47
Pattern 9 Repetition of a key term 49
Pattern 9a A variation: same word repeated in parallel structure 53
Pattern 10 Emphatic appositive at end, after a colon 56
Pattern 10a A variation: appositive after a dash 60
Modifiers 64
Pattern 11 Interrupting modifier between S and V 65
Pattern 11a A full sentence as interrupting modifier 69
Pattern 12 Introductory or concluding participles 73
Pattern 13 A single modifier out of place for emphasis 77
Inversions 80
Pattern 14 Prepositional phrase before S and V 81
Pattern 15 Object or complement before S and V 84
Pattern 15a Complete inversion of normal pattern 86
An assortment of patterns 89
Pattern 16 Paired constructions 89
Pattern 16a A paired construction for contrast only 93
Pattern 17 Dependent clause as subject or object or complement 97
Pattern 18 Absolute construction anywhere in sentence 100
Pattern 19 The short, simple sentence for relief or dramatic effect 103
Pattern 19a A short question for dramatic effect 105
Pattern 20 The deliberate fragment 108
3 Sentences Grow 111
Style 111
Combining the patterns-ten ways 112
Expanding sentences 117
Myths about coordinators 119
A sentence with special emphasis: the periodic sentence 122
4 Figurative Language in Sentences 124
Figures of speech 124
Allusion 124
Analogy 125
Hyperbole and understatement 127
Irony 128
Metaphor 128
Personification 130
Simile 130
Further reading 131
5 The Twenty Patterns-In Print 132
"Tough Country," from C. L. Sonnichsen's Tularosa 132
Excerpt from Arthur Schlesinger's A Thousand Days 139
"Two Ways of Seeing a River," Mark Twain (1835-1910) 143
Appendix 145
Punctuation 145
Suggested review questions 153
Miscellaneous questions 156
Index 157