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Fetching Raymond
Mr. McBride ran his upholstery shop in the old icehouse on Lee Street, a few blocks off
the square in downtown Clanton. To haul the sofas and chairs back and forth, he used a
white Ford cargo van with “McBride Upholstery” stenciled in thick black letters above a
phone number and the address on Lee. The van, always clean and never in a hurry, was a
common sight in Clanton, and Mr. McBride was fairly well-known because he was the
only upholsterer in town. He rarely lent his van to anyone, though the requests were more
frequent than he would have liked. His usual response was a polite “No, I have some
deliveries.”
He said yes to Leon Graney, though, and did so for two reasons. First, the
circumstances surrounding the request were quite unusual, and, second, Leon’s boss at the
lamp factory was Mr. McBride’s third cousin. Small-town relationships being what they
are, Leon Graney arrived at the upholstery shop as scheduled at four o’clock on a hot
Wednesday afternoon in late July.
Most of Ford County was listening to the radio, and it was widely known that things
were not going well for the Graney family.
Mr. McBride walked with Leon to the van, handed over the key, and said, “You take
care of it, now.”
Leon took the key and said, “I’m much obliged.”
“I filled up the tank. Should be plenty to get you there and back.”
“How much do I owe?"
Mr. McBride shook his head and spat on the gravel beside the van. “Nothing. It’s on
me. Just bring it back with a full tank.”
“I’d feel better if I could pay something,” Leon protested.
“No.”
“Well, thank you, then.”
“I need it back by noon tomorrow.”
“It’ll be here. Mind if I leave my truck?” Leon nodded to an old Japanese pickup
wedged between two cars across the lot.
“That’ll be fine.”
Leon opened the door and got inside the van. He started the engine, adjusted the seat
and the mirrors. Mr. McBride walked to the driver’s door, lit an unfiltered cigarette, and
watched Leon. “You know, some folks don’t like this,” he said.
“Thank you, but most folks around here don’t care,” Leon replied. He was preoccupied
and not in the mood for small talk.
“Me, I think it’s wrong.”
“Thank you. I’ll be back before noon,” Leon said softly, then backed away and
disappeared down the street. He settled into the seat, tested the brakes, slowly gunned the
engine to check the power. Twenty minutes later he was far from Clanton, deep in the hills
of northern Ford County. Out from the settlement of Pleasant Ridge, the road became
gravel, the homes smaller and farther apart. Leon turned in to a short driveway that stopped
at a boxlike house with weeds at the doors and an asphalt shingle roof in need of
replacement. It was the Graney home, the place he’d been raised along with his brothers,
the only constant in their sad and chaotic lives. A jerry-rigged plywood ramp ran to the side
door so that his mother, Inez Graney, could come and go in her wheelchair.
By the time Leon turned off the engine, the side door was open and Inez was rolling out
and onto the ramp. Behind her was the hulking mass of her middle son, Butch, who still
lived with his mother because he’d never lived anywhere else, at least not in the free world.
Sixteen of his forty-six years had been behind bars, and he looked the part of the career
criminal—long ponytail, studs in his ears, all manner of facial hair, massive biceps, and a
collection of cheap tattoos a prison artist had sold him for cigarettes. In spite of his past,
Butch handled his mother and her wheelchair with great tenderness and care, speaking
softly to her as they negotiated the ramp.
Leon watched and waited, then walked to the rear of the van and opened its double
doors. He and Butch gently lifted their mother up and sat her inside the van. Butch pushed
her forward to the console that separated the two bucket seats bolted into the floor. Leon
latched the wheelchair into place with strips of packing twine someone at McBride’s had
left in the van, and when Inez was secure, her boys got settled in their seats. The journey
began. Within minutes they were back on the asphalt and headed for a long night.
Inez was seventy-two, a mother of three, grandmother of at least four, a lonely old
woman in failing health who couldn’t remember her last bit of good luck. Though she’d
considered herself single for almost thirty years, she was not, at least to her knowledge,
officially divorced from the miserable creature who’d practically raped her when she was
seventeen, married her when she was eighteen, fathered her three boys, then mercifully
disappeared from the face of the earth. When she prayed on occasion, she never failed to
toss in an earnest request that Ernie be kept away from her, be kept wherever his miserable
life had taken him, if in fact his life had not already ended in some painful manner, which
was really what she dreamed of but didn’t have the audacity to ask of the Lord. Ernie was
still blamed for everything—for her bad health and poverty, her reduced status in life, her
seclusion, her lack of friends, even the scorn of her own family. But her harshest
condemnation of Ernie was for his despicable treatment of his three sons. Abandoning
them was far more merciful than beating them.
By the time they reached the highway, all three needed a cigarette. “Reckon McBride’ll
mind if we smoke?” Butch said. At three packs a day he was always reaching for a pocket.
“Somebody’s been smokin’ in here,” Inez said. “Smells like a tar pit. Is the air
conditioner on, Leon?”
“Yes, but you can’t tell it if the windows are down.”
With little concern for Mr. McBride’s preferences on smoking in his van, they were
soon puffing away with the windows down, the warm wind rushing in and swirling about.
Once inside the van, the wind had no exit, no other windows, no vents, nothing to let it out,
so it roared back toward the front and engulfed the three Graneys, who were staring at the
road, smoking intently, seemingly oblivious to everything as the van moved along the
county road. Butch and Leon casually flicked their ashes out of the windows. Inez gently
tapped hers into her cupped left hand.
“How much did McBride charge you?” Butch asked from the passenger’s seat.
Leon shook his head. “Nothing. Even filled up the tank. Said he didn’t agree with this.
Claimed a lot of folks don’t like it.”
“I’m not sure I believe that.”
“I don’t.”
When the three cigarettes were finished, Leon and Butch rolled up their windows and
fiddled with the air conditioner and the vents. Hot air shot out and minutes passed before
the heat was broken. All three were sweating.
“You okay back there?” Leon asked, glancing over his shoulder and smiling at his
mother.
“I’m fine. Thank you. Does the air conditioner work?”
“Yes, it’s gettin’ cooler now.”
“I can’t feel a thang.”
“You wanna stop for a soda or something?”
“No. Let’s hurry along.”
“I’d like a beer,” Butch said, and, as if this was expected, Leon immediately shook his
head in the negative and Inez shot forth with an emphatic “No.”
“There’ll be no drinking,” she said, and the issue was laid to rest. When Ernie
abandoned the family years earlier, he’d taken nothing but his shotgun, a few clothes, and
all the liquor from his private supply. He’d been a violent drunk, and his boys still carried
the scars, emotional and physical. Leon, the oldest, had felt more of the brutality than his
younger brothers, and as a small boy equated alcohol with the horrors of an abusive father.
He had never taken a drink, though with time had found his own vices. Butch, on the other
hand, had drunk heavily since his early teens, though he’d never been tempted to sneak
alcohol into his mother’s home. Raymond, the youngest, had chosen to follow the example
of Butch rather than of Leon.
To shift away from such an unpleasant topic, Leon asked his mother about the latest
news from a friend down the road, an old spinster who’d been dying of cancer for years.
Inez, as always, perked up when discussing the ailments and treatments of her neighbors,
and herself as well. The air conditioner finally broke through, and the thick humidity inside
the van began to subside. When he stopped sweating, Butch reached for his pocket, fished
out a cigarette, lit it, then cracked the window. The temperature rose immediately. Soon all
three were smoking, and the windows went lower and lower until the air was again thick
with heat and nicotine.
When they finished, Inez said to Leon, “Raymond called two hours ago.”
This was no surprise. Raymond had been making calls, collect, for days now, and not
only to his mother. Leon’s phone was ringing so often that his (third) wife refused to
answer it. Others around town were also declining to accept charges.
“What’d he say?” Leon asked, but only because he had to reply. He knew exactly what
Raymond had said, maybe not verbatim, but certainly in general.
“Said thangs are lookin’ real good, said he’d probably have to fire the team of lawyers
he has now so he can hire another team of lawyers. You know Raymond. He’s tellin’ the
lawyers what to do and they’re just fallin’ all over themselves.”
Without turning his head, Butch cut his eyes at Leon, and Leon returned the glance.
Nothing was said because words were not necessary.
“Said his new team comes from a firm in Chicago with a thousand lawyers. Can you
imagine? A thousand lawyers workin’ for Raymond. And he’s tellin’ ’em what to do.”
Another glance between driver and right-side passenger. Inez had cataracts, and her
peripheral vision had declined. If she had seen the looks being passed between her two
oldest, she would not have been pleased.
“ Said they’ve just discovered some new evidence that shoulda
been produced at trial but wasn’t because the cops and the prosecutors covered it up, and
with this new evidence Raymond feels real good about gettin’ a new trial back here in
Clanton, though he’s not sure he wants it here, so he might move it somewhere else. He’s
thinkin’ about somewhere in the Delta because the Delta juries have more blacks and he
says that blacks are more sympathetic in cases like this. What do you thank about that,
Leon?”
“There are definitely more blacks in the Delta,” Leon said. Butch grunted and mumbled,
but his words were not clear.
“Said he don’t trust anyone in Ford County, especially the law and the judges. God
knows they’ve never given us a break.”
Leon and Butch nodded in silent agreement. Both had been chewed up by the law in
Ford County, Butch much more so than Leon. And though they had pled guilty to their
crimes in negotiated deals, they had always believed they were persecuted simply because
they were Graneys.
“Don’t know if I can stand another trial, though,” she said, and her words trailed off.
Leon wanted to say that Raymond’s chances of getting a new trial were worse than
slim, and that he’d been making noise about a new trial for over a decade. Butch wanted to
say pretty much the same thing, but he would’ve added that he was sick of Raymond’s
jailhouse bullshit about lawyers and trials and new evidence and that it was past time for the
boy to stop blaming everybody else and take his medicine like a man.
But neither said a word.